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A Boy


Tell me father, Tell me loud,
What to do, to make you proud?

"Never scream, Never deny,
It's wisdom to be shy

Never scream and Never fight,
Walk away, as a blind."

How father to be shy
when I see a human cry?

"Listen boy, they're lying,
It's a show all this crying."

How father to be shy
when I see the people die?

"Listen boy to the rules!
Great words, only for fools!"

Tell me father, Tell me loud,
What to do, to make you proud?

"We have enemies, my child,
They hate our kind

You must fight, You must kill!
Show no mercy, it's a skill!"

Why father? Why dad?
Boys like me are so bad?

"Listen boy to the rules!
Great words, only for fools!"

Why father? Why dad?
Boys like me are so bad?
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:icondanielluster81:
danielluster81 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
That's a nice poem!=D
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014
Happy to hear this!
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:icondanielluster81:
danielluster81 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Thanks!=D
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:icondogyjoe:
dogyjoe Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014   Writer
It is quite good, but there are things with which I do don't agree but yet again, I am only one of many ;p
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xristina13 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Student Writer
i saw the comments with the 0ne-word replies.. i liked the meaning of this poem but i would like to know what inspired it?I really hope you will respond to this comment.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 9, 2014
Θα σου απαντήσω, αλλά πιθανώς να μην σου απαντήσω.

Δυστυχώς αυτά που βλέπω κι αυτά που ακούω,
όχι στην τηλεόραση, ζωντανά.
Η πραγματικότητα ξεπερνά ακόμα και την ποιητική υπερβολή.
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Rumai Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Dear, would you mind if I wrote a short story using this kind of idea? It would be my own take and of course I would credit you in the description. If yes, I will also provide a link when it is finished. ;) (Wink) 
Thanks~
              
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
No propblem. Send me a message with a link when you submit it.
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:iconrumai:
Rumai Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
Alright! Thank you!
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:iconduraiku-kun:
Duraiku-kun Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
a rather overused topic and not very good on the flow, but an interesting take on something nonetheless.
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