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Tell me father, Tell me loud,
What to do, to make you proud?

"Never scream, Never deny,
It's wisdom to be shy

Never scream and Never fight,
Walk away, as a blind."

How father to be shy
when I see a human cry?

"Listen boy, they're lying,
It's a show all this crying."

How father to be shy
when I see the people die?

"Listen boy to the rules!
Great words, only for fools!"

Tell me father, Tell me loud,
What to do, to make you proud?

"We have enemies, my child,
They hate our kind

You must fight, You must kill!
Show no mercy, it's a skill!"

Why father? Why dad?
Boys like me are so bad?

"Listen boy to the rules!
Great words, only for fools!"

Why father? Why dad?
Boys like me are so bad?
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Original: Peace in the world
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:iconlugia20711:
Lugia20711 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2015  Student Writer
Very thought provoking.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2015
Thanks.
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
nicely written:)
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:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Professional General Artist
An interesting and thoughtful poem.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015
Thanks.
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:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Professional General Artist
Plesure.
:)
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:icondanielluster81:
danielluster81 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
That's a nice poem!=D
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014
Happy to hear this!
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:icondanielluster81:
danielluster81 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!=D
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:iconnestharon:
Nestharon Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014   Writer
It is quite good, but there are things with which I do don't agree but yet again, I am only one of many ;p
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xristina13 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Student Writer
i saw the comments with the 0ne-word replies.. i liked the meaning of this poem but i would like to know what inspired it?I really hope you will respond to this comment.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 9, 2014
Θα σου απαντήσω, αλλά πιθανώς να μην σου απαντήσω.

Δυστυχώς αυτά που βλέπω κι αυτά που ακούω,
όχι στην τηλεόραση, ζωντανά.
Η πραγματικότητα ξεπερνά ακόμα και την ποιητική υπερβολή.
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:iconrumai:
Rumai Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Dear, would you mind if I wrote a short story using this kind of idea? It would be my own take and of course I would credit you in the description. If yes, I will also provide a link when it is finished. ;) (Wink) 
Thanks~
              
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
No propblem. Send me a message with a link when you submit it.
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:iconrumai:
Rumai Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
Alright! Thank you!
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:iconduraiku-kun:
Duraiku-kun Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
a rather overused topic and not very good on the flow, but an interesting take on something nonetheless.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconjasminenightheart:
Jasminenightheart Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice, I knew It'd be a good idea to accept this into the group 
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconjasminenightheart:
Jasminenightheart Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
lol its no prob, I suck at poetry so I might as well promote someone else lol
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:iconslblack:
slblack Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
V nice :)
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconarcticnelffi:
ArcticNelffi Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I usually don't read poems but this made me read it after first few words. Great job XD
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconlittledica:
littledica Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
how beautiful!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconmkoji:
MKoji Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student General Artist
wow :))
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconmkoji:
MKoji Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Student General Artist
Np :))
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:iconguest-1001:
Guest-1001 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
Very powerful poem. Says a lot about how society thinks men are "supposed" to act.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Thanks.
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NoctisLiberi Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is amazing!! I love it! Would you mind if I posted it on my Facebook? I'd of course give you credit, and provide a link to this
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
No problem, but why don't you simply use the "share" button?
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:iconpixiepearl:
pixiepearl Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nICCCCE c:
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Thanks.
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BioVass Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
some grown-up are shameless, they don't think "he's like me 'n' stuff", they just kill and cripple.
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OoJitkaoO Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh well. Nice piece of artwork. It expresse the changing of the way to deal with problems in life. In my opinion it deals with important themes and is really authentic. 
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconsherrylin:
Sherrylin Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:?
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:iconkakasy:
Kakasy Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
I find your poem really great. I think it expresses the situation perfectly.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconmino-sosimple:
Mino-Sosimple Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student
You forgot the most important questions
The question is
Why lie to my father,
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:iconmino-sosimple:
Mino-Sosimple Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student
hahahaha look my son mmmm
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:icontlc234lovelystars:
tlc234lovelystars Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Hmmm... Some of your sentences doesn't rhyme and sound awkward.  In my opinion, I would say your poem looks good.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Thanks.
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:icontlc234lovelystars:
tlc234lovelystars Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student General Artist
:)
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:iconlightyole:
LightyOle Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is really great.those who criticize your grammar did not read with their heart.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconhellguard777:
hellguard777 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
This is awful. You made no sense for trying to rhyme. How did this get featured again?
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:iconinvaderjix-hatena:
InvaderJix-hatena Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Bad parenting. That's why.
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