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A GREAT ACTOR


So you came to say sorry,
But you do it just for glory

To show people you are kind,
You think, you are a great mind

So do it! Tell your lie!
Be an actor! Show you're shy!!

That's your crowd, make your try!
Let them see you, when you cry!!

Speak for nights, full of fear,
That you felt, your death is near

Waking up by your screams,
Say, you die in your dreams!

Give them moments of repentance,
Say you're here with no resistance

Let them see your rotting heart!
Yeah! Lying it's an art!

It's your show, It's your chance!
And I see it, You are in trance!

So do it! Tell your lie!
Be an actor! Show you're shy!!

That's your crowd, make your try!
Let them see you, when you cry!!
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:iconjimmyroger:
JimmyRoger Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
Aggressive!
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OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
Excellent!!!!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
Thanks.
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EyiRokafou Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Ευχαριστώ!!!!!!!!!!!!
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freshvibes77 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
very good, makes me think of someone with Narcissistic Personality Disorder, the actor, the fake, the fraud, pretending to care when they are only looking to control you, treat you one way in front of others and another in your face to make you look like the one with the problem...brilliant indeed
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
Thanks.
I'm happy that people can see most of my thoughts and like the overall result.
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EricAMBM Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013   Writer
Very good. Its very simple, but effective. Nice use of rhyming couplets and repetition.

Also, it reminds of some of my own, like "The World's Greatest Actor"
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Thanks.
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EricAMBM Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013   Writer
no problem
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