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A Strange Journey


Arrived at less than zero,
Fate was written,
 'am no hero,

I couldn't save you,
'couldn't love
Truth was hidden,
Pain above,

I should 've tried this dream before!

Tried to catch you at the end,
Blood and flesh, a weird blend,

A strange journey in Light,
A chance to stop this crazy fight,

I 'll return, I'll live again!

       \/\/\/

Arrived at just at zero,
Your will bitter,
 'am no hero,

I could save you,
I could hold,
Love was hidden,
Pain above,

You should 've tried me before!

You insisted till the end,
Time and place, a weird blend,

A strange journey behind,
A chance to search me and to find,

I 'll return, I'll live again!

       \/\/\/

Arrived at less than just one,
I saw you dancing,
White Swan

You can save me,
You can love,
Life is stolen,
Fill my hole,

Please, Don't Kill Me, Feel Befooore!

You denied me, one more end,
Love And Flesh, A Weird Blend,

A strange journey inside,
A chance to plan, but feeling blind,

I 'll return, I'll die again!
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:iconangeluchiha7:
angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Student Artist
awesome peon nice job
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
Really thanks.
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Student Artist
your welcome ^_^
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:iconmarleendekker:
marleendekker Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014   Photographer
Nicely written :)
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconkostaschicken:
kostaschicken Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Καλό.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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:iconlenakenanou:
LenaKenanou Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Υπεροχο!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Ευχαριστώ!!!!!!!!!
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:iconlenakenanou:
LenaKenanou Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Τίποτα, το εννοώ.
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:iconjimmyroger:
JimmyRoger Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
ωραίο είναι.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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:iconmarilenaalexia:
MarilenaAlexia Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Πάρα πολύ καλό!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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:iconmarilenaalexia:
MarilenaAlexia Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Τιποτα, είναι καλογραμμένο.
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:iconcrubethesiren:
CrubeTheSiren Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Αυτό είναι εντάξει, ξεφεύγει απ' το γλυκανάλατο.
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:iconerikthewild:
ErikTheWild Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Δυνατό!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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:iconelizawolfgirl:
elizawolfgirl Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Πολύ καλο!!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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:iconeyirokafou:
EyiRokafou Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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:icongracetornoshaya:
GraceTornoshaya Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
NeverEnding Journey or Deja vu?
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
και τα δυο μαζί.
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:iconlouisatornova:
LouisaTornova Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
NeverEnding Journey!
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:iconuglysavag:
UglySavag Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Καλό είναι.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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:iconlaraghostz:
LaraGhostZ Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Σκεφτηκες να το σπάσεις σε τρια διαφορετικά;
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Αν ηταν δύο κομμάτια, ίσως, αλλά τρια δε μου αρεσε.
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OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Διάβασα ένα σχόλιο παρακάτω, όντως θα γινόταν καλό ντουέτο.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Χαιρομαι που συμφωνεις.
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MariaKat00 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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:icongracetornado:
GraceTornado Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
3 φάασεις ή 3 έρωτες;
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1925devianT Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:( (Sad) 
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:iconbeth-z:
Beth-Z Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013   General Artist
I imagine some sort of ballad-like melody with this. That or some type of rock.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
Well...I have imagined with 2 vocalists, male-female, that's the standard.
More metal than rock.
Fast or mid tempo, but I wouldn't say no to a dynamic ballad with explosions.
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:iconbeth-z:
Beth-Z Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013   General Artist
That's more or less what I hear.
I'd volunteer to do it, but I feel I would fail to do justice XD
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JokerrLaughs Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How interesting.
Very well written!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013
Thanks.
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