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A Wish


A wish for me
A wish for me and for you

A wish for beauty
A wish for beauty and for war

A wish for Eros
A wish for Eros and for Psyche

    \/\/\/

A wish for me
A wish for me and you

A wish the dream
A wish the dream and the moment

A wish from my heart
A wish from my heart for your eyes

A wish; Should it be done?

    \/\/\/

A wish for me
A wish for me and for you

A wish I met you
A wish for you

A wish to my Angel
A wish to my Angel and to my demons

      \/\/\/

A wish; On your lips
A wish; Hush; And I'm Lost.
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Mia Efhi

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:iconkittilovespassion:
KittiLovesPassion Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Nightwish really needs to sing this!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Edited Feb 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I like Nighwish, but I never thought of this!

Which album of Nightwish you think it's the best?
For me Once it's their magnum opus.
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:iconkittilovespassion:
KittiLovesPassion Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Student Digital Artist
This can compare to Ghost Love Score?
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Ghost Love Score is a song of Once.
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:iconkittilovespassion:
KittiLovesPassion Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I know.
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:icondanielluster81:
danielluster81 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome poem!:icongrin--plz:
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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:icondanielluster81:
danielluster81 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
You're welcome!=)
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:iconnestharon:
Nestharon Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014   Writer
Emotional and Romantic (in its own way).
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
More emotional, at least for me.
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:iconangeluchiha7:
angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Student Artist
nice poem
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:icongracetornado:
GraceTornado Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Μια ευχή.....
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:iconlouisatornova:
LouisaTornova Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ευχαριστώ.
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:iconmariakat00:
MariaKat00 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ευχαριστώ.
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:iconpunx-chan89:
punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad but lovely all at once
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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:iconpunx-chan89:
punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:)you're welcome
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:iconaztecatl13:
Aztecatl13 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
Very interesting 
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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:iconmyprrrecious:
myprrrecious Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013
This is a great reflection of the natural thinking span and tangents.
Be as abstract as you like,
there is a lot of truth in it.
Thank you for the revelation.
It is greatly appreciated.


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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Really thanks.
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:iconjeimii-chan719:
Jeimii-chan719 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
i like this, well done!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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:iconjeimii-chan719:
Jeimii-chan719 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
you're very welcome!!!!!!
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:iconlara0xm:
Lara0XM Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
This is a very smooth poem. The repetitive words really smooth it over and with the slight variations kept it from getting boring.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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:iconvildarra:
Vildarra Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is pretty and elegant and sensual and sad and pretty much everything bundled in one. I love it :D
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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:iconangeluchiha7:
angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Artist
sad...
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It can be more than...
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:iconangeluchiha7:
angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Artist
a wish,dream :D
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:iconeclecticquill:
EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Writer
Honestly, I'm not sure what to make of this... I do like the use of repetition, but I find some of the imagery to be rather abstract, to the point of being disjointed and irrelevant. I'm also not sure how this qualifies as erotic, as it doesn't invoke any amorousness.
Overall the poem is well structured, but the content lets it down.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, it needs rereading...
Anyway thanks for your comment.
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:iconeclecticquill:
EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Writer
I've reread it, twice. I must stand by my comment though, I really do like it from a structural point of view, the rhythm of the piece is great and the repetition is well utilized. However, I still think the content lets the poem down. 
Sorry if my criticism seems harsh, it's only my opinion. Good luck with your future writings. :)

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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No, it's not. everything it's ok. Again thanks, I mean it.
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:iconeclecticquill:
EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome :)
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:iconanila73:
anila73 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
SAD
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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