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So hard and deep,
your picture's flying over me,
seems so real

All hope is gone,
your eyes taken from me,
I can't hear

My dream's refused,
I must sleep,
but I pray

My heart's abused,
I must leave,
but I'll stay.

So hard and deep,
your picture's flying over me,
seems so real

All hope is gone,
your eyes staring at me,
I'm in fear

My dream's refused,
I must sleep,
but I pray

My heart's abused,
I must leave,
but I'll stay.

So hard and deep,
your picture's flying over me,
seems so real

So dark to kill,
your eyes cut me,
you are here

My dream's refused,
I must sleep,
but I pray

My heart's abused,
I must leave,
but I'll stay.
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Slytherin83 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Student General Artist
This is good
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015
Thanks!
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Slytherin83 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Student General Artist
Very welcome, talented friend
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:iconwrittenruse:
WrittenRuse Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
I've definetly felt this before. It sums up the feelings very well. Wonderful job.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconthelovelyones:
thelovelyones Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Photographer
Wow. This is amazing! <3
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconmorrigan94:
Morrigan94 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
!!!!!!Clap 
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
tHANKS.
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:icontigerlove566:
TigerLove566 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfinallyplz: This is so beautiful!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
Thanks.
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:icontigerlove566:
TigerLove566 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No Prob :3
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:iconeyirokafou:
EyiRokafou Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Ευχαριστώ!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconjeimii-chan719:
Jeimii-chan719 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
that was sad but very well written.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconjeimii-chan719:
Jeimii-chan719 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
you're always welcome!!!
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:icondragonofyang:
dragonofyang Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So much melancholy in this. It's beautiful.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconwindblownwallflower:
WindblownWallflower Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wondrous, this poem flows beautifully.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
Thanks.
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:iconvaleriecfrechmann:
ValerieCFrechmann Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely. :) I like that it's very lyrical.  I found myself singing it.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
Thanks!
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:iconbluesapphire2000:
BlueSapphire2000 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow! That's beautifully written! Amazing!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
Thanks!
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:iconbluesapphire2000:
BlueSapphire2000 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem!
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:iconirishgirl217:
irishgirl217 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Great job. 
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
Thanks!
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:iconepicaracacy:
Epicaracacy Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student Writer
Are you considering turning this to song? or just leaving it alone as song lyrics
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
I don't know music, but poetry many times, at least the way I see it contains rhythm-music. I have a rhythm in my mind based to the words, but I can't do it alone.
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:iconepicaracacy:
Epicaracacy Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student Writer
Hmm. I play the piano, little bit of guitar, i kind of like it, you could tell me what you had in mind?
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
But how? You can't hear me
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:iconepicaracacy:
Epicaracacy Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student Writer
Sound me a recording of you humming to the tune?

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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
dara-dara
daradarada dadara
darada
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:iconepicaracacy:
Epicaracacy Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student Writer
That is not really a recording, and its almost impossible to discover the tune from that, when i read the song lyrics i was imagining a Breaking Benjamin type feel.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
Sorry I can't think of sth else.
Breaking Benjamin??? I don't know this.
Maybe in another life we'll do this song. However someone else, in the real world had told me that these lyrics reminded him of a song called CONFUSED released by SYLVER, on 2004. It's not what I imagined, but is somewhat near.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
I don't know how much helpful is this, anyway thanks for your ineresting.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
50 favs!!!
Thank You All!!!
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Enemv33 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heavy stuff. Well done!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
Thanks!
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:iconbushaqua:
Bushaqua Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Heart touching poem:)
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
Thanks.
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AmayaZero Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love it! It is a very strong poem.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
Thanks.
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AmayaZero Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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:iconunabiding:
Unabiding Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have no idea how this is erotic but.. Somehow... It is. This piece is truly amazing :)
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Artist
that seem sooo sad but its a good poem ^-^
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
Thanks.
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Faithful-Imagination Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is really sad... but well done.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
Thanks.
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