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ACHILLES


Bound To Ride To Troy's Wall,
Heading For The Fight,
Heroes Immortality
Gods Will Never Know!

Day By Day, There's No Fear,
An Army On His Own,
Day By Day, There's No Fear,
Courage Has No Flaw!

Demigod with royal blood,
Master of the fight,
Demigod with royal blood,
Honour! Valour! Pride!

Year By Year, There's No Fear,
An Army On His Own,
Year By Year, There's No Fear!
He Can't Be A Pawn!!!

"The girl I've earned with my sword,
Rightfully is mine!
No fight! No word!
Till again mine!"

Demigod with royal blood,
Master of the fight,
Demigod with royal blood,
Not a step behind!

Leader of the Myrmidones,
No one defies,
Commander of the Myrmidones,
Only! He! Decides!

Trojans now they attack,
Full of courage fight,
No Achilles, No luck,
Table's turned, now changed side!

Patroclus, in place, he died,
Mourning mixed with rage!
Hector's brave, he won't hide,
Duellists on stage!!!

Crossing swords, the sound of steel,
"Victory Is Mine!"
Crossing swords, the sound of steel!
Hector's falling! Dying!!

Still his fury, he won't stop,
Still he's full of rage,
Still his fury, he won't stop!
The body desecrates!

Days pasS, his rage still,
No one dares his eyes,
Priamus, he comes, he'll kneel,
Begging, falling, cries!

"Hector's body on one side,
On the other bring your gold,
Hector's body on one side,
Go and do as I told."

Troy's gold collected all,
But not equal to hold,
Polyxena, princess'll talk,
Full of pride, though no sword

"Take my jewels, Take my ring,
There's no more to ask again,
Hold your rage and your greed,
Give us Hector, end this pain."

Achilles impressed of her,
Beauty and her pride,
Achilles in love with her,
Death is lying behind.

Back To War, There's No Fear,
An Army On His Own!
Back To War, There's No Fear,
Courage Has No Flaw!!!

But now he's in love with her,
On Ida secret meetings,
Now he's in love with her,
His heart is full of feelings

He's forgotten mother's words,
The prophecy, his flaw,
Pares watches, no swords,
No enemy he saw

An arrow on his heel, it burns,
Darkness falls around,
A poisoned arrow, he kneels;
Now lying on the ground.

       \/\/\/

Bound To Ride To Troy's Wall,
Heading For The Fight,
Heroes Immortality
Gods Will Never Know!
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dogyjoe Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014   Writer
As I was reading I imagined it as a play and I was sitting somewhere in the middle to get a perfect view :) Thanks for writing it. Very well put, wrote and depicted.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014
It's the original story itself that helps on this.
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dogyjoe Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014   Writer
I understand.
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Student Artist
cool peom
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
Thanks.
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Artist
your welcome ^-^
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BigKev24 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014   Artist
In the end, Achilles heel was Achilles heel
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OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
Thanks.
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