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ANONYMOUS


Over the mountain,
into the night,
alone he is standing,
he'll finally fight

Free from the future,
no Love and no Hope,
there's no surrender,
no fear to stop

No more in the shade,
his life and his will,
the flash of the blade,
the sound of the steel.

     \/\/\/

A war with no battle,
defeated was born,
the song in the cradle
the mourning of Norn

An enemy hidden,
an unholy ghost,
the challenge forbidden,
the pride was lost

A life in damnation,
in fear and in pain,
no sign of salvation,
just hoping in vain

Condemned to be lonely,
not ever be loved,
no woman, no story,
no talisman hold

But then came a day
that flame didn't burn,
no Hope to his pray,
no sign to return

He woke up next morning,
but nothing to pack,
Ηe gave no warning,
Ηe asked not for luck

He ended his serving,
all sins have been payed,
His book no more pending,
all acts have been played

He was no warrior,
but no need to learn,
one fight for honour
and no more to earn.

     \/\/\/

Over the mountain,
into the night,
alone he is standing,
he'll finally fight

Free from the future,
no Love and no Hope,
there's no surrender,
no fear to stop

No more in the shade,
his life and his will,
the flash of the blade,
the sound of the steel!

And if he survives
there's nothing undone,
A few just more nights,
No hiding and run

Death or Victory, to Death!
Anonymous fights!
Death or Victory, to Death!
Anonymous strikes!

Death or Victory, to Death!
Death or Victory, to Death!

He is no warrior,
but no need to learn,
one fight for honour,
and no more to earn.

Death or Victory, to Death!

And if he survives
it can't be undone,
A few just more nights,
No hiding and run

Death or Victory, to Death!
The reaper awaits!
Death or Victory, to Death!
Anonymous Saints!

Death or Victory, to Death!
Death or Victory, to Death!

Death or Victory, to Death!
Anonymous fights!
Death or Victory, to Death!
Anonymous strikes!

Death or Victory, to Death!
Anonymous fights!
Death or Victory, to Death!
Anonymous; dies.

Lay now; Rest in fame
All the angels know your name.

      \/\/\/

Death or Victory, to Death!
Death or Victory, to Death!
Death or Victory, to Death!
The greek ANONIMOS (ΑΝΩΝΥΜΟΣ)
is not translation or rendering or even the same story,
like on the other cases of twins, greek-english, there are in my collection.

It could be the same character in a different situation
or
a different character in the same situation
or simply
everything is the same except the window of the watcher
...
Maybe it's another watcher or he's a vigilant?
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Lugia20711 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  New member Student Writer
Great work!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015
Thanks! Glad you like it.
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katiousa15 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015
A wonderful poem!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
Thanks.
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katiousa15 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
You are welcome!!
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Professional General Artist
:iconaparazita-r::iconsquirrelflight-77:Your artwork has been graciously featured in Titans Genuine Literature feature ,stay wonderful!Hug:iconsquirrelflight-77::iconaparazita-r:
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
Thanks.
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ShadowsGirl9 Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OHHHH MY GOSH THIS IS AWESOME!!! describes them so well <3
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
Thanks.
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BigKev24 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014   Artist
Nice!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
Thanks.
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BigKev24 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014   Artist
You're welcome!
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JohnnyTheSailor Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
:clap::clap::clap:
:clap::clap::clap:
:clap::clap::clap:
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
Thanks.
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ErikTheWild Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
Death or Victory, to Death!
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JimmyRoger Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
.............
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OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
Δεδομένου ότι είναι ο ίδιος χαρακτηρας έχει μεγάλο ενδιαφερον,
να διαβάσεις και τα δυο και να βάλεις τις ιστορίες δίπλα-δίπλα στο μυαλό σου.
Κρίμα που δεν ξέρουν όλοι ελληνικά.
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OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
Δεδομένου ότι είναι ο ίδιος χαρακτηρας έχει μεγάλο ενδιαφερον,
να διαβάσεις και τα δυο και να βάλεις τις ιστορίες δίπλα-δίπλα στο μυαλό σου.
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limarieinred Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Terrific!  So very true! 
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EyiRokafou Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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EyiRokafou Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Παρακαλώ.
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NearlyInvisibleMind Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
WOW! Bravo:clap:
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
Thanks.
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NearlyInvisibleMind Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are very welcome:rose:...again, and always:frail:
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vaporsheart Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WOAH!!! DEEEEPPPP!!! (i'm not even sure if i got the full picture) I loved the dramaticness in the ending. and i thought for sure he was going to live as well :/
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
Really thank you!
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vaporsheart Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :meow:
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Ourancommonerscoffee Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student Writer
Great job~!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
Thanks!
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Jeimii-chan719 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
that was well written, nice job.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
Thanks!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
50 Favs!!!
Thank You All!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
This is the same character of the greek ΑΝΩΝΥΜΟΣ, but not the same story. Let's say is the same character in a Parallel Universe.
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Xxbrokenwristxx Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This was a great poem. I only have two suggestions

For one, I would suggest using period and commas to your advantage. You want the reader to read the poem as you do. Therefore, if you pause when reading it, put a comma. If you stop, put a period.

Secondly, some lines just sounded odd. As a poet, I know it is hard to find the right fix of words, and it is even harder with fixed form. I would suggest reading the poem aloud, and seeing if some of the lines can be edited.

All in all, a great poem that will key to a large audience!

Critique by Critique-for-All

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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
For the odd thing probably as a reader you are right. Commas are there when I think it's needed and...you mind find it strange I'm gonna ask. Period is ;
Thanks alo t for your time and comment!
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Xxbrokenwristxx Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's not strange, it's your style :)

You welcome :D
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ElementalHybrid Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist
This had me compelled to keep reading all the way to the end.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
Anonymous could be this girl [link] though he's fighting for nothing, at least not for himself.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
Anonymous could be a girl [link]
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Unabiding Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
For some inexplicable reason, when I read this a tune came with it... It has this Odysseus type of feel to it, I suppose you could say... Well done.
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TheeEmmyKay Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope you take this is a compliment, but this is written a little bit like certain works of William Blake (who's one of my favourites).

This is really truly phenomenal!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
Thanks.
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gothchick913 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
amazing
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
Thanks.
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gothchick913 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
youre welcome
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DreamingMind-set Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Bad ass! :woohoo:
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