I haven't read the original, only a short summary.
Have you read the bible, actually Genesis, and heard about arguments concerning the differences between the christian-greek translation and the original Hebrew? It was "Elohim" that created human executing orders of God or "Elohim" is God? Is human capable to become something even higher than angels?
Is there aliens out there? Do strange creatures live inside this hollow earth or earth isn't hollow?
None of these answers will change "the juice" of man, there is no benefit and certainly simple people can't give an answer just by thinking or imagining. There are facts and old truths we don't have access and on these we have, most of us we are not capable to read these sources. You must know hebrew and ancient greek in this case, in others you need latin or...whatever.
If you don't know the facts it's just a guess or fantasy, not an opinion. If you know the facts, yes it's an opinion, but not necessarily the right one. 1 = 1000 - 999 1 = 999 - 998 ... ... ... 1 = 2 - 1
On the other hand it's possibly that you don't accept that there is any truth on these things. So you can make a theory that satisfies you, but there's no chance to prove it. However if you manage to give life to my PC I may believe you, but don't expect to fully understand you. I won't even respect you if you don't do something that helps me. Doctors do this thing.
This is a great poem that can be taken in many different ways. Personally, I saw it as technology taking over the world of humans, to the point where we don't really do anything on our own anymore, but these "machines", are very necessary for daily life. This may not be the idea you were going for, but it is always good when lyrics/poems make the reader think.
I like you use of punctuation, because many poets and lyricist seem to forget about this important aspect. Great job!
U.D.O. group is by the name of the singer/main composer leader of the band. In the past he was the singer of the band ACCEPT and U.D.O. is near to to Accept sound, but not the same good. If you want to try/check more better start with ACCEPT. I suggest you should try the live album 1990 - STAYING A LIFE, which works as a compilation and it has clear sound. I say this because some of the old albums have not so good sound, it actually depends of what version you might find, remastered or not. However if you prefer to hear studio albums then start with 1982 - RESTLESS AND WILD 1983 - BALLS TO THE WALL 1985 - METAL HEART Yes, I'm infected by the metal virus!!! lol...