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Man and machine,
Together as a team,
It's a necessary evil,
for the golden crown,

Beast and machine,
The undefeated sin,
It's gonna spread all over,
Heading to the throne!
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:iconthecrazyleviathan:
TheCrazyLeviathan Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Hobbyist Interface Designer
What if our creations surpass us... what if we have surpassed our creator?
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
For me there is no such case!
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:iconthecrazyleviathan:
TheCrazyLeviathan Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Hobbyist Interface Designer
But what if... what if
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015
If, then all would be depended on the attitude of both sides.
Similar to the relationships of parents-children.

Also, if, then there would probably appear "problems" between the children-creatures.
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TheCrazyLeviathan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist Interface Designer
But what of Dr. Frankenstein?
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:icondraganthemighty:
I haven't read the original, only a short summary.

Have you read the bible, actually Genesis, and heard about arguments concerning
the differences between the christian-greek translation and the original Hebrew?
It was "Elohim" that created human executing orders of God or "Elohim" is God?
Is human capable to become something even higher than angels?

Is there aliens out there?
Do strange creatures live inside this hollow earth or earth isn't hollow?

None of these answers will change "the juice" of man, there is no benefit
and certainly simple people can't give an answer just by thinking or imagining.
There are facts and old truths we don't have access and on these we have,
most of us we are not capable to read these sources. You must know
hebrew and ancient greek in this case, in others you need latin or...whatever.

If you don't know the facts it's just a guess or fantasy, not an opinion.
If you know the facts, yes it's an opinion, but not necessarily the right one.
1 = 1000 - 999
1 = 999 - 998
...
...
...
1 = 2 - 1


On the other hand it's possibly that you don't accept that there is any truth
on these things. So you can make a theory that satisfies you, but there's no
chance to prove it.
However if you manage to give life to my PC I may believe you, but don't
expect to fully understand you. I won't even respect you if you don't do
something that helps me. Doctors do this thing.
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TheCrazyLeviathan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist Interface Designer
2.505+?
If you answer this correctly then I understand, if not then respect moi, if can and won't then theorize, if guess then don't.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015
There is no answer.
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student Artist
good poem I think its a poem
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Nazgul91 Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice :)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
Thanks.
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darkoc3an Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Good job
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
Thanks.
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ErikTheWild Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Nice!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Thanks.
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IHasTheAllSpark Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nice job
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
Thanks.
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Dragonrusher21 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
yep I like it 
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
Thanks.
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Dragonrusher21 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
yer welcome
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PinkieTane Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sounds like a badass Disney villain song <3
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Dragonrusher21 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
totally like someone wants to take over the world with robots or something 
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NitaVG Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice~
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
Thanks.
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NitaVG Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome XD
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julian0123 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Good one :)
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kittyblack13 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow, i love the overall though behind this! Great word choice and allusions. :)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
Thanks!
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kittyblack13 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sure thing!
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Xxbrokenwristxx Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is a great poem that can be taken in many different ways. Personally, I saw it as technology taking over the world of humans, to the point where we don't really do anything on our own anymore, but these "machines", are very necessary for daily life. This may not be the idea you were going for, but it is always good when lyrics/poems make the reader think.

I like you use of punctuation, because many poets and lyricist seem to forget about this important aspect. Great job!

Critique by Critique-for-All

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LensLove78 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Photographer
I agree... I have the same point of view.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
Thanks!
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love how your poem's always seem like songs, reminds me of Vocaloid. :meow:
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
U.D.O. - 2002 - Man And Machine - 01 - Man And Machine
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:?
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
It's a song named Man And Machine, the 1st one of the album Man And Machine released on 2002 by U.D.O.
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh I see now. :3
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
Did you hear it?
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
They seem good! :meow:
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
U.D.O. group is by the name of the singer/main composer leader of the band. In the past he was the singer of the band ACCEPT and U.D.O. is near to to Accept sound, but not the same good. If you want to try/check more better start with ACCEPT.
I suggest you should try the live album 1990 - STAYING A LIFE, which works as a compilation and it has clear sound. I say this because some of the old albums have not so good sound, it actually depends of what version you might find, remastered or not. However if you prefer to hear studio albums then start with
1982 - RESTLESS AND WILD
1983 - BALLS TO THE WALL
1985 - METAL HEART
Yes, I'm infected by the metal virus!!! lol...
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student Artist
vary good again ^-^
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Gothic-Romantic99 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
An interesting poem. I like how you change man to beast in the second stanza. Nice job.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
Thanks.
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Gothic-Romantic99 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
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