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DIS – GRACE


Watch the stars,
they will blow tonight,
Hold my head,
I have lost my fight

Ease your eyes,
I'm alone tonight,
There's no ice,
I came you to find

I feel sorry,
but it's not  'am shy,
I feel sorry,
I should not deny

I feel sorry,
but this hole of Light
held my senses
all this wasted time

Y ' insisted long,
Now I'll stop denying,
Blind, so wrong,
Not for me such buying

Naughty flirt,
but so pure, 'am  'mazed,
Feel my dirt,
Feel my bitter taste

One more guy
on your working night,
 'feel so dry,
You dragged out my lying.

Thank you lady,
 've treated me so fair,
Fairy not,
but still me I dare

After all,
It is just a night
and the hole;
still It's full of Light.
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:iconeyirokafou:
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
Ευχαριστώ!!!!!!!!!!!!
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dragonofyang Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well-written! :) I like how short each stanza is, yet they don't lose the flow of the piece. Very nicely done.
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LensLove78 Nov 9, 2013  Student Photographer
Intense...profund writed,loved the "hole of full Light" concept.
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scarletnight25 Nov 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
amazing
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