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Sent to war
with no arms at all
Fight to live and die again
Surviving is unfair

Hell in you, Prayers of death
Keep your hope back inside
Full their lines, an endless fight
One more step to the other side

Left by friends, alone in line
Left in darkness, in the shine
Ordered chaos for the blind

Dream of Angels
Demons are hunting, their game


Sent to war
with no arms at all
Fight to live and die again
Surviving is unfair

Split in pieces, Prayers of death
Flow your scream to the sky
Traitors stray, an endless fight
Blow your dream, just deny

Left by Love, alone in line
Left to freeze, in the sunshine
Ordered chaos for the blind

Dream of Angels
Demons are hunting, their game.
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How You Dared?
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:iconerikthewild:
ErikTheWild Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Heavy and hard.
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JimmyRoger Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
Πολλά μπορείς να πεις...
Σε ένα θα σταθώ, αρχικά λες ότι είναι συμβολικό, 
αλλά άνετα μπορεί να μιλάει και για αληθινό πόλεμο.
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OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
"Some people are really attracted for what they fear, as an inner push to finally face this fear."
Δεν κρατιέσαι ακόμα και στα σχόλια!
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WingDiamond Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
:horns:
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
Thanks!
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EyiRokafou Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Ευχαριστώ!!!!!!!!!!!!
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kachin77 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't quite understand it fully which is rare in my case. I can usually tell what a poem or piece is trying to say but I can see where you're taking this to. I feel really attached to it for some reason, as if it's meaningful to me. I really love it.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
Really thanks.
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kachin77 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome.



















(BythewayIthinkI'vefoundwho'sgoingtobemyselectionoftheartistsoftheweekbutyeahjusttoletyouknow)
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Izabella2016 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Surviving is unfair..." This line reminds me of what someone I used to know used to say. "Don't pity the dead, pity the living." I really like think though, good job.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
Except personal experiences that put me in the mood I was also thinking real war and the ones who survived but without legs or hands.
 Have you read Dalton Trambo's novel "Johnny got his gun"?
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Izabella2016 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No, I haven't read that. But, I do understand your thinking with war.
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LovelyAmbey Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow! that is like perfect for halloween and all. what inspired you to write this?
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
I was just in the strange mood "Life is an unfair war...." and more ... It's complicated...
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LovelyAmbey Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ohh i suppose you dont want to tell me the complicated part
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
Yes.
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LovelyAmbey Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
well if you ever want to i am willing to listen!! :hug:
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
Well these words are for real life friends, but it's nothing special you have never heard before.
On life there are things like relationships, money, health, love. For all these we can try, but the result is not always up to us and it's nothing more to do. And when it happens to fail at the same time to all of these, it's hard! It's unfair!
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LovelyAmbey Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I agree with you but technically life itself isn't fair
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DarkSaber13 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the "fight to live and die again" line ^_^
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
Thanks!
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DarkSaber13 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome :)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
Some people are really attracted for what they fear, as an inner push to finally face this fear.
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This was a very powerful piece, the imagery and the descriptions were amazing.

I'm absolutely terrified of demons. I'm pretty sure that not everyone who practices the dark arts are evil, there are some good people who do demonic stuff but in general I'm terrified of demons and Satan and stuff like that. Ironically enough the kind of anime's that I watch and enjoy are about demons and Satan.
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AskHelluvabutler Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013   General Artist
Oh so you hate me?
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't hate you, (I have a friend that does), to be honest I didn't think much of you during the whole anime. XD
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AskHelluvabutler Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013   General Artist
*glares at you*
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tylerp1991 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i hate demons, i hate the devils
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WingDiamond Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
Both of you can rest easy, there are no demons or devils!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Me too...
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tylerp1991 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsmilieplz::iconholyplz:
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katiousa15 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
Wonderful!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Ευχαριστώ, Κατερίνα.
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katiousa15 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Παρακαλω!
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sarahowen97 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a fantastic poem! Some great imagery you've thrown in there, my friend :) I especially like the line "Flow your scream to the sky"...very chilling...
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
Thanks.
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