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You can hold me
You can push me

You can help me
You can fight me

You can heal me
You can bleed me

You can save me
You can kill me

You can love me
You can hate me

Whatever You'll do
Whatever I will do

I promise

You will live in me forever.
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thelittlebluewolf Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for doing this,it help to stop me from killing mself
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
I'm glad for this.
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:iconthelittlebluewolf:
thelittlebluewolf Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*nodded*
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BubbleGum5963 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
How beautiful! I love it..though I always felt this way towards love but never knew how to explain it..:3
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OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
FOREVER
 
or
WHATEVER????????????
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
Διαφορετική περίπτωση το καθένα.
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:iconeyirokafou:
EyiRokafou Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Ευχαριστώ!!!!!!!!!!!!
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C-blaze21 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Quite the emotion there.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconpugmanmatt:
Pugmanmatt Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
That's very sweet
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whitetrashnose Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
blah, blah, blah
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silver-ships-fly Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

i've your title for a contest The Gigantic Generosity Giveaway! in my title poem.

thank you ♥

 

wonderful poem! <3

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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
Thanks!
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:iconravynkatt:
ravynkatt Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very intense, it's a like a hard slap of emotion. The voice is so dominant and decisive.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
Thanks!
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XxSenmeiHimitsunoxX Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ERMAHGERD
:dead:
I LOVE IT
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
Thanks.
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TristanCody Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Student Writer
I feel like the spacing on the last few lines are unnecessary to the piece. Maybe try combining them and see how they work? Change some wording so they flow into one another? Just some suggestions. 

At the end of the day, very nice piece. :clap: I like it. It was a joy to read, my friend. 
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Picassos-Bathroom Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013   Writer
I liked this. I have only one suggestion and that is the last few lines. Perhaps instead of: "Whatever You'll do" and "Whatever I will do" maybe something like: Whatever you do, Whatever I do. And, the last line: Forever. You will live in me.
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xWickedxRosex Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Student Writer
So pretty <3
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Thanks.
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:iconrensongdemon:
RenSongDemon Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like. :iconblushingplz:
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
50 favs!!!!!
Thank you all!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Camilia-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful work on this poem!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Really thank you!!!
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Camilia-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! ;)
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Kreatress Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice:)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Thanks!
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aliasxneo3 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is great! Good job ^^
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Thank you!!
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aliasxneo3 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your very welcome! (yay for exclamation points lol)
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Strong wording! Amazing!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! ;3
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PyRoKiD0000 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing, i was left speechless by this.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
Thank you!
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XocoWilde Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013   Digital Artist
oh my. I don't know if is for a lover or something else. But is very nice and deep. Well done
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
Thanks.
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Artist
i love this one so much its awesome1!!
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DarkGraySkies045 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it ,it's beautiful :)
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Aesop-Epics Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wicked! It's like an ultimatum between lovers, I like this. Well done!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
Thanks.
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