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Words by KristianaGrand




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I cannot let it go,
I'm gonna lose it all,
My feelings just they flow,
I cannot stop this fall

I feel alone without you,
I'm Losing All that Here's and True,
I'm so alone without you,
This is what love can really do

I'm so Lost Inside of You,
I'm Losing All that Here's and True,
I'm so Alone Without You,
Though I Never Was In You


I cannot let it go,
I'm gonna lose it all,
My feelings just they flow,
I cannot stop this fall

I'm Losing All that Here's and True,
I'm so Lost Inside of You.
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Nestharon Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014   Writer
I can feel and see a deep message. The word "Lost" is very well depicted, yet in a minimalistic style, but the truth is I enjoy writing and reading minimalistic poems, so good job :thanks: Thank you.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
I don't know if you or others see it, but I had in mind sth like explosive-minimalistic.
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:iconnestharon:
Nestharon Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014   Writer
;p
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Artist
 wow vary powerfully peom
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconangeluchiha7:
angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Student Artist
 your welcome
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:iconixmeraz:
ixmeraz Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
so pretty...very touching.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 9, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconoga-chan:
oga-chan Featured By Owner May 3, 2014   General Artist
Do you have a wattpad? 
if you dont you look into it.
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19andMugsy Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
if it sounds confusing, then, it must be love! 
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
One side love, it's more than confusing,
it's unexplainable, but so real.
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19andMugsy Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
one sided love?? okay, true true.
I've been there. for some reason
i didn't think of it!   
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JimmyRoger Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
I cannot let it go
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
....then rot in love!!!!
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OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
............
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MariaKat00 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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:icondaimarachel:
DaimaRachel Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
Beautiful! <3
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KaizenKitty Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Student Writer
I love the first stanza, it breathes rythm and rhyme :nod:, the second stanza doesn't quite have the same rhythm (could be on purpose, but okay..), and after that it gets kind of repetitive? I understand this is a song, but still, it has too many repeating lines for my liking.
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Pugmanmatt Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
The words
Of my life
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
Love it! :) 
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
Thanks!
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:iconanninhaxox:
Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
You're welcome! 
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myriadwhitedarkness Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This will probably upset you. But I checked this poem out because a guild I used to be in in an mmorpg was called LOST. 

These lyrics are really good! I'm not sure if it was what you meant; but I took the "though I've never been inside you/I'm so lost inside of you" as the feeling of being in love with someone you don't know very well, but desperately wanting to get to know them and/or what they're thinking. Again, that was just a personal interpretation. Very nice^^
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
You are near.
Thanks for your good words.
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
This is so very lovely <3
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
Thanks.
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Bellaninha12 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
Heartfelt and beautifully written. :) 
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
Thanks.
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Artist
vary touching
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
Thanks.
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:iconangeluchiha7:
angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student Artist
your welcome ^-^
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AskHelluvabutler Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013   General Artist
Wow it is an amazing piece of art.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
Thanks.
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AskHelluvabutler Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013   General Artist
Any time.
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sealotsgirl Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
beautiful
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Thanks.
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sealotsgirl Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
no problem.
thanks for checking out my art.
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:iconcookenz:
Cookenz Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
I love these lyrics :)
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Thanks!
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:iconcookenz:
Cookenz Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
as a singer/songwriter myself, I approve :D
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Singer counts most, in my point of view.
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:iconcookenz:
Cookenz Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Its all good in the end :)
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