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Love Me Stranger, I See You,
Love Me Stranger, I Need You,
Love Me Stranger, I'll Leave You,
Love Me Stranger; I Know You?
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:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Professional General Artist
:clap:
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:iconmari-kagelar:
mari-kagelar Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  New member
I like this so much I don't know where to start Toy Chica blushing 
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
Thanks!
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:icongoldham92:
Goldham92 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
how much love do you need?
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
As much as she can give, not more.
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:icongoldham92:
Goldham92 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
sounds like she didn't get enough
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
Sometimes and not always, if you don't give you don't take.
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:icongoldham92:
Goldham92 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
i don't take or give either
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014
This is also a case, but not of this poem.
Merry Christmas.
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:icongoldham92:
Goldham92 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014
merry christmas 
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:iconangeluchiha7:
angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student Artist
nice peom
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:iconbailthesociety:
BailTheSociety Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Its like a whole effin life spilled in four lines.
Love it ^^
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
Really thanks!
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:iconerikthewild:
ErikTheWild Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Hi stranger!
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:iconjimmyroger:
JimmyRoger Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
If you meet this stranger again;
Please, tell him that she knows.
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:iconoliviathehealer:
OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
Small and powerfull, like a bullet!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconeyirokafou:
EyiRokafou Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Ευχαριστώ!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconlegolaspanther:
LegolasPanther Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
What an interesting little poem. There is a great motivation of thought brought out in this. If I am correct, it seems you have a Dodoitsu Japanese form on our hands here. As since all the lines proceed each in seven syllables, and four lines altogether. Not often you find one. Thereby adding to your expertise in technique. I also like how you have created an audible refrain in your work, which expresses the emotions for the mysterious stranger.

Refrains are vital to any type of poetry and create a new message each time even though those same words/phrases are used. In using them the way you did, it created a surprising impact on what I felt about the 'stranger'. I like how you have created this work and hope for you to continue with such amazing talent!

As I would like to know, I did not add much to vision, for the poem concerned the emotions between the individual and the stranger.

Sincerely

~LegolasPanther~

Vision 3.5/5
Originality 5/5
Technique 5/5
Impact 5/5
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
Really thanks, but I have to say one thing about the technique. I work more with my ears.
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:iconlegolaspanther:
LegolasPanther Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That is fine! :-) I know another writer on here who is the same :-)
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:iconwolfkillerx3:
WolfKillerX3 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
nicely done
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
Thanks.
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:iconwolfkillerx3:
WolfKillerX3 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
Any time :)
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:iconbluesapphire2000:
BlueSapphire2000 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah..that's some good poetry. Really like this one! 
The more I think about it, the more interpretations I'm getting.
Great work! :D
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
Glad you like it!
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:iconhanarenee:
HanaRenee Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
very nice
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
Thanks.
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:iconhanarenee:
HanaRenee Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
Yep
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:iconlauras45:
LauraS45 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
so simple it's sweet
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
Thanks.
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:iconbakugan5ds:
Bakugan5Ds Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013   General Artist
Aw, this is so pretty. I always love a good romantic poem. Nice job :D
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
Thanks.
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:iconbakugan5ds:
Bakugan5Ds Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013   General Artist
You're welcome :huggle:
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:iconthat1personyouforgot:
That1PersonYouForgot Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So true...
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:iconshadow-boxer-bunny:
shadow-boxer-bunny Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
seems like the person wishing for the stranger to love him/her saw the back of their head then turned around and then saw their face.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
The story behind can be anything and different for every person.
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:iconunabiding:
Unabiding Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I've felt this way before.
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:iconrequiem-of-insanity:
REQUIEM-OF-INSANITY Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
Amazing simply wonderful
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:iconangelc28:
AngelC28 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Student Artist
Paradox ending. I love it!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
Thanks.
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:iconpippintook95:
PippinTook95 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hello stranger, this is so cute and oddly charming! I like the question ending. It makes me smile.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
Glad you like it.
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:iconlavenderhyuuga:
LavenderHyuuga Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Student General Artist
I don't think I hear you...

But anyway...

I love it :clap:
You don't know me,
So deal with it
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
Bye...Sweet Stranger...
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:iconlavenderhyuuga:
LavenderHyuuga Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Bye stranger :wave:
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
Do You Hear Me, Stranger?
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