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My Cell's Awaiting


My nightmares were never real,
because my nightmares were born of fear.

I have no nightmares,
for I fear no more,
Now all my dreams,
are past or gone,

There's no hope,
There's no fear,
I am free,
Never so clear,

But it's for human
this damned prison,
A cell's awaiting
for no reason.
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:icondogyjoe:
dogyjoe Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014   Writer
Not bad. The way you depicted the journey of a cell overcoming fear (this is what I understood :) ), I find it quite good.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014
Thanks.
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:icondogyjoe:
dogyjoe Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014   Writer
;)
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:icondelphifilm:
delphifilm Featured By Owner May 26, 2014   Filmographer
i think i cannot receipt the last stanza. :shrug: :( I can understand the state of feeling calm in the second but last stanza. but the last one is tough - in the way that ... I thought the lyrical I considered himself to be free by having no sorrow and hope. And yet he doesnt feel that free because everyone else - every human - is in a cell of what he was, once? Just that he cannot feel free, as long as others are not?
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
It's the bitterness of experience that even when you are ok from inside,
a monster might  come and grab you, appearing out of nowhere!
You know; we are humans and this can happen.
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Carageomodels Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Φανταστικό!!!!!Δεν έχω λόγια....
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 24, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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ErikTheWild Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
Very good!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
Thanks.
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MariaKat00 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
Πολυ καλά και τα δυο!
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