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My Cell's Awaiting



My nightmares were never real,
because my nightmares were born of fear.

I have no nightmares,
for I fear no more,
Now all my dreams,
are past or gone,

There's no hope,
There's no fear,
I am free,
Never so clear,

But it's for human
this damned prison,
A cell's awaiting
for no reason.
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To Keli Mou Perimeni

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andrewrogers96 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love your poems!:)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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TheFlawedOne Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I like this.  Are you broken free of the cell?
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Not fully yet, but I have moments.
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TheFlawedOne Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Good, I hope you find the key!
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
nice:)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
Welcome:3
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Nestharon Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Professional Writer
Not bad. The way you depicted the journey of a cell overcoming fear (this is what I understood :) ), I find it quite good.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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Nestharon Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Professional Writer
;)
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delphifilm Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i think i cannot receipt the last stanza. :shrug: :( I can understand the state of feeling calm in the second but last stanza. but the last one is tough - in the way that ... I thought the lyrical I considered himself to be free by having no sorrow and hope. And yet he doesnt feel that free because everyone else - every human - is in a cell of what he was, once? Just that he cannot feel free, as long as others are not?
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's the bitterness of experience that even when you are ok from inside,
a monster might  come and grab you, appearing out of nowhere!
You know; we are humans and this can happen.
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Carageomodels Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Φανταστικό!!!!!Δεν έχω λόγια....
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ευχαριστώ.
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ErikTheWild Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
Very good!!!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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MariaKat00 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
Πολυ καλά και τα δυο!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ευχαριστώ.
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EyiRokafou Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ευχαριστώ.
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