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Broken dreams in lovers room,
Pain's flowing in the air,
She's so perfect, my doom,
Pain's growing, I don't dare.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015
It's a poem of suffering, from my point of view there is no connection to "Bye Bye Beautiful".
Bu you know I have no intention to inflict my view to readers.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015
The re's no reason to ask sorry, it's ok.
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KittiLovesPassion Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I hid the comment and reply.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015
There is no problem, really.
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KittiLovesPassion Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I felt stupid after I got your first reply, so I need to unhide that comment?
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:icondraganthemighty:
It's not bad if you see things, other than what the author had in mind,
even more in this case that what you see it's not something bad-negative.
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:iconeyirokafou:
EyiRokafou Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Ευχαριστώ!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ask-Black-Everbleed Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student General Artist
I am not a poet but I do some things like this too. This is nicely done. I fell like this once to a girl.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
Yes, it's for a girl.
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Ask-Black-Everbleed Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Ok I'm about to post something I made and it's for a girl
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demonrobber Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
Love can give us courage and love can break our heart. The wound is so deep, may the tragic lovers never part. Love can spell doom but is also gives us hope. Nicely done.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
Love, actually Eros sometimes, special times is like faith, so strong and so unexplainable.
Thank you.
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ravingroshie Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice :)
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
Thanks.
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TheJDWiley Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nicely done.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
Thanks.
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
really great!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
Thanks.
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome Love 
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:icondacewillowby:
DaceWillowby Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
So simple yet so effective, I love it! :D :D :D <3 xxxx
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
Really thanks!
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DaceWillowby Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
It's ok :) :D It's really cool and I love all the other art too ^^
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ruuk-ve Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I like it. Short and punctual.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
Thanks.
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ruuk-ve Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
your very welcome, friend
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Artist
cool
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
Really Thank you!!!
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Artist
your vary wecome
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
And it also fits nice with [link]
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TheeEmmyKay Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YES, these fit together wonderfully!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
Just born, inspired by TinyKitten10 's "Broken and empty".
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
Just born inspired by TinyKitten10 's "Broken and empty".
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