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PARALLEL


I'm living twice in one life
I'm feeling empty, a hole
I'm feeling sharp, like a knife
I'm growing fast, I'm too old

A deadly game that I'm in
there's no life within
I cannot die, I can't live
and here again I begin

The impossible
here it's possible!

I fight alone with my sword
I'm feeling down, so cold
I have the power, I hold
I'm here alone, not a word

I hear a voice, who is he?
There's no one looking for me
I don't believe what I see
I cannot feel, yet I'm free!

The impossible
here it's possible!

I'm lying down in daze
I feel asleep, but I'm awake
The room is fading in haze
I see her there on the lake

I'm loosing twice the same day
I'm sleeping once for two fates
I'm going now, but I'll stay
I'm failing all of my dates!

The impossible
can't be possible!

I am a slave and I'm bored
but that's the kingdom I hold
I am the master, the lord
I cannot rule my world!

They're hunting me, I'm in fear
but it's so silent here
I look behind, they are near
I feel no pain, not a tear

The impossible
now it's possible!

Why no one believes?
Why no one can see?
I see her there, she grieves!
I see her there, she's free!

The impossible
here it's possible!

The truth is what you can feel
beware of what you unseal
It's so deep, there's no heal
you'll fight alone on the hill

The impossible
now it's possible!
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Original: DuplicityΑντίστοιχο Στα Ελληνικά:

PARALLILOS

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:iconjustatalkingrooster:
JustATalkingRooster Featured By Owner May 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
This is great! I love the imagery.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
nice job:)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
welcome:)
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Briung Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I rapped this. I LIKE IT
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Happy to hear this!
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"I am a slave and I'm bored
but that's the kingdom I hold
I am the master, the lord
I cannot rule my world!"

Peace, my friend.


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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's not in my hand, too many invaders!!!
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Neb-Storm Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014
Wow, reminds me of one of the poems I wrote about my nightmare cycle.
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BigKev24 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014   Artist
Nice poetry or lyrics!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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BigKev24 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014   Artist
You're welcome!
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JimmyRoger Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
!!!!!!!!!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ευχαριστώ.
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OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
Και τα δυο πολύ καλά!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ευχαριστώ.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm loosing twice the same day
I'm sleeping once for two fates

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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EyiRokafou Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ευχαριστώ.
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EyiRokafou Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Παρακαλώ.
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C-blaze21 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
Interesting.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Professional Writer
The point of view is jumbled but it fits the theme wonderfully. I think the idea is very clear! On one hand, I've seen some of the imagery before, but on the other I truly like the way you pull it all together into something new. You keep the rhythm well and the rhyming scheme isn't overly done. I quite like this poem! Overall it is well done and I'm a bit torn whether to put it in my 'critiqued' section or my 'fave poems' section.

Critiqued by Critiqued-For-All
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! Really glad you like it!
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Professional Writer
You're welcome :)
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warriorcatshe Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013   Traditional Artist
This is amazing, what is it about?
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well it simply can be a part of a fantasy tale with parallel worlds and someone who lives in both of them.
Now in the real world it can be about someone a little psycho who lives too much in his own world, like writing, gaming or simply a totally crazy guy.
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warriorcatshe Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013   Traditional Artist
Lol ok.
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GypsyMountainman Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Professional Writer
Very nice, thanks for sharing
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm here to share.
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TropicalCreations Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very nice and well written! Great job!  :) (Smile) 
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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maryjayne530 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Wow, very well written. There's so many things I could mention- the title that you chose, the repetition but slight changes in the phrase "the impossible, here it's possible", the 2nd stanza, my favorite lines- "I'm loosing twice the same day, I'm sleeping once for two fates". It all came together as a whole into a fantastic poem. Great job :)

 

 

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Jeimii-chan719 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
this is nicely written and a bit sad though.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Actually, in my point of view the the "worst" that may fits is cynic. Anyway, really thank you!
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Jeimii-chan719 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
oh but you're welcome!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
50 Favs!!!
Really Thank You All!!!!!!!!!!!!
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kittyblack13 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wonderful emotion in this. great underline meanings and cognoscenti ideas in your words. Simply beautiful. :)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you like it!
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kittyblack13 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:aww:
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tylerp1991 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
interesting :)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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tylerp1991 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome s :)
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NML-Photography Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I can relate to this. Great work.
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PippinTook95 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow I really love this one too! The rhyme in this piece really moves well and the flow is good.
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Unabiding Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, agreed!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!!!! For the favs and your comments!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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StarlightShoals Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Student Writer
Paralellism is something I feel in my own life. Maybe not the same as yours, but enough to relate to this greatly.
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