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PARALLEL II


I'm dying along with myself,
every night,

Always on the same nightmares,

Without being able to help me,

But only to wake,
If I succeed, so.

And when I wake up,
I feel worst,

Because I'm tired
and even more alone.

And hope
that feeds me and kills me
at the same time,

Always leading me
to do again the same mistakes

and I feel worst,

Because I can't wake up,

Neither I want to sleep.
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OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
Un-Parallel?
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EyiRokafou Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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skygirl23 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really good 
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
Thanks.
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xiongirl Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Student Writer
I love it!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
Thanks.
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Meya-Iris Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
I like very much this poem; I know what you are talking about. Do you also write in Greek language?
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:iconnoonehasthisusername:
This is very deep, I love it! It is sad, yet very true at the same time! Very well written too! Awesome job, this is great!!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
Thanks.
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:iconnoonehasthisusername:
No problem!
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