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PARALLEL II


I'm dying along with myself,
every night,

Always on the same nightmares,

Without being able to help me,

But only to wake,
If I succeed, so.

And when I wake up,
I feel worst,

Because I'm tired
and even more alone.

And hope
that feeds me and kills me
at the same time,

Always leading me
to do again the same mistakes

and I feel worst,

Because I can't wake up,

Neither I want to sleep.
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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skygirl23 Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really good 
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xiongirl Oct 10, 2013  Student Writer
I love it!
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:iconmeya-iris:
I like very much this poem; I know what you are talking about. Do you also write in Greek language?
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:iconnoonehasthisusername:
This is very deep, I love it! It is sad, yet very true at the same time! Very well written too! Awesome job, this is great!!
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