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Poetry and Song Lyrics by Camilia-Chan




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I came to find you White Swan,
Like you, else no one

I came to see your smile again,
To forget all of my pain

I came to sense your warmth, your breath,
You are my heaven, here on earth

You were sleeping, so sweet,
I stood still, I felt so guilt

You were sleeping, so calm,
I stood and stared, angel's charm

I softly touched you, as a baby,
Not to wake you, dream my lady

After all,  'am the bewitched,
You're just sleeping, what you've dreamed?

Am I worthy your be prince?
Am I worthy for your kiss?

I came to find you White Swan,
I hope again we'll dance.
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:iconlosgeloest:
losgeloest Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015
absolutely beautiful :heart:
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015
Thanks!
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Amaryllis-C Featured By Owner Edited Jan 10, 2015  New member Hobbyist Writer
Its beautifully written which I love a lot. I read it quite a few times because I enjoyed it as well :)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015
It's nice to hear this!
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Amaryllis-C Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  New member Hobbyist Writer
No problem :)
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:iconnestharon:
Nestharon Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014   Writer
Beautiful, inspiration, emotional and full of romantic energy. And all of these packed in a minimalistic poem. Not bad...:clap: :thanks:
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
I wanted a certain moment-picture to the reader.
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:iconnestharon:
Nestharon Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014   Writer
It was given :thanks:
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:iconangeluchiha7:
angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Student Artist
vary nicely done
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
Thanks.
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BigKev24 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014   Artist
nice!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconbigkev24:
BigKev24 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014   Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconerikthewild:
ErikTheWild Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Nice.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Thanks.
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OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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:iconkatiousa15:
katiousa15 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Beautiful and tender!!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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:iconkatiousa15:
katiousa15 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
Παρακαλώ.
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:iconc-blaze21:
C-blaze21 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Thanks.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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SuperMastour64 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist
Very good poem, loved every line of it!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
Thanks!
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SuperMastour64 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist
No prob, you deserve it!
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MariaKat00 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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:iconeverlasting90:
Everlasting90 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very reminiscent of Swan lake. Beautiful.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
Thanks.
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Chukapix Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful!!! :heart:
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
Thanks!
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
Thanks!!!
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vaporsheart Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awwww, so sweet!! reminds me of a (simpler) shakespear poem! (if shakespear poems were translated like this i would actually enjoy his work :XD:)
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:iconjeimii-chan719:
Jeimii-chan719 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
this is good, i like it.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
thanks.
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:iconjeimii-chan719:
Jeimii-chan719 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
you're welcome!!!!!!!!
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:iconsleazinator:
Sleazinator Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013   General Artist
This is good.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
Thanks.
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Sleazinator Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013   General Artist
No problem.
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AsakoBunny Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really good. ^-^
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
Thanks.
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:iconasakobunny:
AsakoBunny Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome~!
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:iconbellzblu:
BellzBlu Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Student General Artist
amaz ^_^ 
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
tHANKS!
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:iconbellzblu:
BellzBlu Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Student General Artist
its quiet touching acutally :) love can be portrayed in so many different ways
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
Unfortunately Love Is A Weakness.
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:iconbellzblu:
BellzBlu Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Student General Artist
not really. in ways yes, but love also sustains us. sometimes is gorunds us to sanity, for someone we need to live for. but yes it is a weakness in a way
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
This is what I mean, you are depended. It's a drug, it depends how much "good" it is, how easily you get it, what you give for and.... And no matter what you do you might not always taste it.
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:iconbellzblu:
BellzBlu Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Student General Artist
its not meant to be easy to get. people give away love too easily though. But I do see your point :)
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