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It was so silent on the hill,
She could hear her steps,
Her breath...
A look at the watch;
Time's not passing,
Not going away,
Like a friend who waits, insists;
Begs
That she must do something at last.
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:icondanielluster81:
danielluster81 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Great poem!=D
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014
Thanks!
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:icondanielluster81:
danielluster81 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
You're welcome!=D
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Jomoku Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It was so loud.. on the hill.
He could see his steps.
His breath...
A look at his wrist.
His pulse was passing.
Going away,
Like an enemy who waits, insists;
Demanding.
That he must do nothing.
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
This is excellent!!!
You should upload it!
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Student Artist
pretty cool
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
Thanks.
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:iconangeluchiha7:
angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Artist
your welcome ^-^
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:iconthedawnmarie:
TheDawnMarie Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 8, 2014
Thanks.
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