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The Hacker


They're saying it's a hacker;
He is haunting souls and files,
He is watching our profiles,
He is stealing our words
He is controlling our dots;
He doesn't care so for us,
He's always there on our flash,
He's our evil dirty part,
He's the virus of the art,
We can all become his dart,
In the day, in the dark;
Can't be controlled,
Cannot be scrolled,
He's the curse of all us; ALL!!!



The Curse


He's the curse of all us; ALL!!!
Cannot be scrolled,
Can't be controlled,
In the day, in the dark;
We can all become his dart,
He's the virus of the art,
He's our evil dirty part,
He's always there on our flash,
He doesn't care so for us,
He is controlling our dots;
He is stealing our words
He is watching our profiles,
He is haunting souls and files,
They're saying it's a hacker;
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:iconmikeyismyfav:
mikeyismyfav Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Student Artist
Ah shell... first i read the house on the hill (tmnt ish) which is scary but this is as scary
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
...it's madness
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mikeyismyfav Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Student Artist
Yeah madness MADNESS oh and i always say ah shell
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Madam--Kitty Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
reminds me of the recent hacking scandal that happened in north korea
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
It can be personal, but also something bigger,
I speak of the realistic side of this, so yes it may bring to the mind big hacking events,
but not of this kind, but the kind that would mess the personal life of each one of us.

He's the curse of all us; ALL!!!
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HollowTree15 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amxing
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Student Artist
the hackers and curses may be bad but this peom is awesome
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Honestly thanks!
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Student Artist
your welcome ^_^
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ErikTheWild Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Anonymous?
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ErikTheWild Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Who's the hacker?
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JimmyRoger Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
They're saying it's a hacker;
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Al-Rey-Writer Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Writer
Sounds like the NSA to me!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Who knows?
Maybe it is.
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pollutedpencil Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hackers are bad, curses are bad, this poem is great. 
Nice work.
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IHasTheAllSpark Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
the work is nice, but I must disagree with hackers and at times even curses being bad. All things can be used for good.
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pollutedpencil Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very fair opinion. 
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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TerramArmsXIII Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this is awesome, hackers are bad!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, they are!
All kind of hackers...
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TheScripter Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student General Artist
This poem is fantastic, you can just feel the fear of hackers with the constant drumming of the lines...sorry if my wordings  a little weird.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
No reason to ask sorry.
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MariaKat00 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ευχαριστώ.
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JeffreyRebowlski Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
A good poem to reflect on the paranoia of today. 
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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JeffreyRebowlski Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Good work. 
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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Delta-13 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! I have to say that I really like this poem. I have to admit that I don't know much about poems, but I hope you find my comments helpful all the same. The idea is really interesting and love how the two poems mirror each other. I think it is really creative to see how the poems are the two sides of the same coin. It's actually amazing to see how the meaning of the exact same lines can change by rearranging the order they're in. My favorite lines from the first half are: "He is haunting souls and files/He is watching our profiles/He is stealing our words".  However my favorite lines in the second half are: "He's the curse of all us; ALL!!!/Cannot be scrolled/Can't be controlled/In the day, in the dark/We can all become his dart."

However, the only part that seems strange to me is the two lines: "He is controlling our dots/He doesn't care so for us," To me, anyway it seems to interrupt the flow of the poem. I'm not sure why, but it tripped me up a little.

Anyway, overall this is a great poem. I really liked it. ^_^
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mikeyismyfav Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Student Artist
Ok if u like it them check out the house on the hill ( tmnt ish )
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hi, from my point of view art does not need "specialists" to "know about", especially writting.
Maybe for other subkind of arts like painting or music that technique it's more important.
I'm glad you like it and yes your comments are really helpful!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
When I type my name to search this is not included in the results.
Does anybody know why?
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ToaTepsak Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Could be an issue with the keywords. Have you tried putting your name in the keyword section when you submitted it??
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's now fixed. Thank you anyway.
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ToaTepsak Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
No problem :)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
TheeEmmyKay Thank you so much!!!!!!
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JimmyBlueBroken Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
ΝΙΨΟΝ ΑΝΟΜΗΜΑΤΑ ΜΗ ΜΟΝΑΝ ΟΨΙΝ.
Ότι παρόμοιο έχω διαβάσει, συνήθως αντιστρέφει και το νόημα, εντελώς.
Εδώ μένει ίδιο το συναίσθημα, αλλά αντιστρέφεται η ροή και του συναισθήματος και της ιστορίας.
Δεν ξέρω τί ήθελες να κάνεις, αλλά είναι πολύ καλό.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ευχαριστώ.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Eyxarist;v.
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