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The Poet Αnd The Fox


She Let Her Approach,
He Looked Her In The Eyes And He Said:

"I'm In Love With You
And I'm Jealous Of You;
I'm really jealous of you.
You are so beautiful,
so free and happy,
even without love.
I'm so jealous of you."

She smiled to him,
immediately,
real smile,
on her lips and on her eyes.
I don't know
if it was the smile he was expecting,
she smiled to him
the way only a fox knows how to do it.
She Looked Him In The Eyes And She Said:

"Let's Dance."
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Staar-Gaazing Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015
I love love stories. Thank you
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katiousa15 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015
A beautiful poem for a man in love.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015
Thanks.
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katiousa15 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015
Welcome.
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LuckySpirit14 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015
wow! this is really cool and beautiful at the same time!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015
Glad you like it!
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LuckySpirit14 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015
:D (Big Grin) 
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Neb-Storm Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
Great Poem!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
Thanks.
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Neb-Storm Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
Your welcome!
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JimmyRoger Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
"Let's Dance."
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OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
"Let's Dance."
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MariaKat00 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
:love::love::love::love:
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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C-blaze21 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
Interesting poem.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
Thanks.
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KaizenKitty Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Student Writer
This looks like something very specific...:shrug: I dunno -- just seems like that to me. What inspired you?
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
If it was so specific you wouldn't ask what inspired me.
I can'treally tell for my own words how much successfull I am, but it was my "target" to make others wonder what's behind.
At least with you I succeeded.
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KaizenKitty Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Student Writer
so you invented something convoluted just to get noticed? :|
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
I didn't, it's just that I don't want to say more.
As a poem, this way I think it is more interesting.
If it was a short tale it would be different.

I was thinking the previous answer I gave you.
What I tell you it's the truth, as there was a certain scene
with background in my mind, but it's not the "correct" answer.
I mean there is nothing wrong with "inventing" stories or scenes
and you don't do it just to get noticed. This is literature!
You "invent" things sometimes based somewhere,
sometimes it's total imagination,
either for fun or to send a message.
A writer, a taler it's impossible to live exactly and all
the things he has written about
A writer-poet-artist, successful or not,
can keep real life scenes exactly as he saw them,
if he finds sometning special and try to describe it
as better as he can,
but also must have this "view" and invent things from what he sees
or invent things of nothing!

On literature you have to invent things!
You have to make people imagine!
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KaizenKitty Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Student Writer
I'm kind of confused. Have you missed the fact that I'm a "Student Writer"? Do you think I don't know what literature is?
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
No, I don't mean to offense you, sorry.
I just wanted to explain my side better.
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KaizenKitty Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Writer
:facepalm: sure sure -- I wasn't offended, just confused
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
We're ok.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
I didn't, it's just that I don't want to say more.
As a poem, this way I think it is more interesting.
If it was a short tale it would be different.
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Priority-Mail Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Student General Artist
But is she a foxy lady?
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
I don't know, if I'll meet the poet again, I'll ask him.
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spotted-cat Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Did they do the "fox-trot" after? ;-)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
No.
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Katragoness Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Reminds me of my friend and I.. I'm a poet and he's kind of a fox. XD 
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
How mush fox is he?
If just a little, it's fun!
If he's a lot you're in trouble...
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Katragoness Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha! just a little. Frankly he's just the right amount in my opinion. He's mischievous and secretive, but he includes me in his secrets. He eventually shows me what he's being so sly about. So it's good. :) But he enjoys his "den" of friends that have garnered his trust and affection. He is the best sort of fox. :) 
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
Nice, enjoy it!
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whereisthelove1242 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student Writer
That's good, very...interesting in a good way
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
Thanks.
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dragonofyang Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's pretty great!! Your poetry's always intriguing to read. :D
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
Thanks.
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NikkiSixxIsALegend Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Wow man, thats ace XD I love foxes in poems.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
Glad you like it.
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NikkiSixxIsALegend Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I wish i could get to analyse poems as good as that in my English exam... and its awesome so everyone better like it XD
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Agent36496 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013   Writer
Good idea
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AsakoBunny Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
... can I make a stupid joke here?

So that's what the fox says. The song was wrong!

Sorry, had to get that out of my system. Great poem btw! Clap 
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
Thanks.
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AsakoBunny Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome~!
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