Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
The Princess Of The North


She was a Princess
of the North,
A war it came
and she was lost

She was enslaved,
She was forced,
They dressed her red
And she was sold.

He was a son,
down, from South,
With light heart
and shy mouth

He never searched,
yet now he found,
Their eyes met
a night around.

They hide in darkness,
She's in Love,
He didn't think
Of what's above

She was a slave
and masters ask
to pay with gold,
to pay for lust.

He was no warrior,
No sword in hand
and no courage
yet to stand.

They'll meet again,
Passion rules,
Two elders pay
For him, her goods

They'll meet again,
Passion rules,
Two elders pay
For him, her goods.

Days passed,
the elders go,
Without gold,
no passion's flaw

But he is young,
with light heart,
He likes her,
but not so hard

But she is young,
with heavy heart,
She keeps some gold,
somewhere apart

She's calling him
and there he's back,
Eyes are meeting
in the dark

But he's young
With light heart,
He's hiding words,
He keeps apart

He makes thoughts
of Love and gold,
A girl in red
can Love so strong?

She hides nothing,
She's in Love
and no one knows
what's above.

They'll meet again,
there he's back,
Lips are kissing
in the dark.

Still a son
With light heart,
He's hiding words,
He keeps apart

But the Princess,
She's in Love,
His head in her
as baby hold

She steals again
and he's back,
Hands are touching
in the dark

He starts to feel,
He starts to Love,
He's now thinking
What's above

How to set
his Princess free?
How to find
a way to flee?

How to find
so much gold?
Or it's time
for the sword?

They'll meet again
in the dark,
but the future's
written black.

Another red,
she loved him too
and now jealous
of them two

She follows them
onto their walk,
she calls the master,
she will talk

She speaks of gold,
hidden apart,
of their meetings
in the dark

The master's now
full of rage,
He sends her somewhere,
in a cage

They tie him
onto a tree
and ask for gold
to set him free.

The story travels
through the sea,
Two elders come
and he is free

They paid the gold,
They paid her goods,
They love the son,
They know the rules.

He'll never see
the Red again,
but it's early
for his pain

She'll never see
his face again,
She feels, She knows,
She's in pain.

His mind on ice,
in a haze.
He still recovers,
He's in daze.

He starts to think,
Was he betrayed?
Or the Red
has also paid?

He meets two elders,
they 'll discuss.
They both agree,
She loves! She does!

He must decide
what to do,
He asks again,
answers two:

"Wait for time,
gold will come
and when you need,
here I am

You won't miss
her touch, her feeling,
I will pay
your every meeting.

Time passes,
You must wait,
You shouldn't challenge
Your own fate."

But the second
Speaks of pride,
Speaks of honour,
Speaks of fight

"Ask your heart,
It's your witness!
Hold the sword,
Save your Princess!"

He can't decide!
He cannot rest!
What to do?
What is the best?

And the Princess
more in pain!
She asks two elders,
but in vain.

He can't decide!
He cannot rest!
What to do?
What is the best?

He doesn't care
so for pride,
but his heart
stands no more time.

He found some gold,
But not enough,
He holds the sword,
He looks so tough!

But fate has
its own will,
The Norns decide,
We cannot steal.

Riding alone,
Into the night,
He'll meet an enemy,
He'll fight

The sword is broken!
Gold is gone!
He's down wounded!
There, alone!

A heavy breath,
A whistling up,
The horse will run,
The elders come.

His wound deep,
there's nothing sure,
but he lives,
though no cure

A life in pain
and in pain!
His red awaiting
in vain

A life in pain
and in pain!
His red awaiting
in vain.

Time passed,
he meets the elders,
They have a message
from his Red dressed

His eyes burning,
not a word,
His heart is broken,
like his sword

He doesn't speak,
He looks his wound
He turns his back,
He's fading out.


I never heard

If or what
they replied,
Time passed
and both they died.

I never heard
about the Princess

She's back to North?
She's now free?
Or still in red,
She cannot flee?


I only know
about the son

His wound deep,
He lives in pain
and He never
fought again.


And still I know
something sure
As too for fate
there's no cure

He will never see
his Princess again,
She will never see
his face again.
Αντίστοιχο Στα Ελληνικά:

I Prigipesa Tou Vorra

Add a Comment:
 
:iconmissanimecritic:
MissAnimeCritic Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Impressive! It's like Shakespeare writing or something.
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!!!
Reply
:iconkittilovespassion:
KittiLovesPassion Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful!
Good for Tuomas x Anette!
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Did you find this on all-art-at-freddys?
I'm on this group by mistake, I didn't know it was not a general group,
but as it seems they want me there.
I don't know Tuomas x Anette,
but thank you!
Reply
:iconkittilovespassion:
KittiLovesPassion Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I did find this on A-A-A-F,  you are welcome. Why I ship this is that it was the possible shipping of Nightwish, thanks to fans (and they really kissed at a performance) so, I hope you like my crazy opinion!
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You meant Tuomas and Anette from Nightwish?

I thought these names had to do with freddy.
Sorry I didn't realize from the beginning we have talked again.
Reply
:iconkittilovespassion:
KittiLovesPassion Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Yes.

Oh my gosh, I'm getting confused, sorry..
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
What's your confusion?
Reply
:iconkittilovespassion:
KittiLovesPassion Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Pretty hard to explain now... ^^; sorry.
Reply
:icona7xfan666:
A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
awesome:)
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you like it!
Reply
:icona7xfan666:
A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
:)
Reply
:iconerikthewild:
ErikTheWild Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Great!
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
Reply
:iconheatherhigurasshi:
heatherhigurasshi Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
Q.Q awhh! that was beautiful!
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
Reply
:iconheatherhigurasshi:
heatherhigurasshi Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
your welcome ^.^ i like it i kinda wanna draw a pictrue to match it XD
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
If you do it send me a note with a link.
Reply
:iconheatherhigurasshi:
heatherhigurasshi Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
ok! lol
Reply
:iconjimmyroger:
JimmyRoger Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
Δεν φημίζομαι για τα αγγλικά μου αλλά δείχνει πολύ καλό!
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ευχαριστώ.
Reply
:icongracetornoshaya:
GraceTornoshaya Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Για αυτό την ιστορία; Ουδεν σχόλιον!
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ευχαριστώ.
Reply
:icongracetornoshaya:
GraceTornoshaya Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Πάντα στη διάθεση σου.
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Μη λες τέτοια γιατί δεν ξέρεις τί μπορεί να σου ζήτησουν!
Reply
:icongracetornoshaya:
GraceTornoshaya Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Μηνανησυχεις δεν τα λέω σε όλους.
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Σωστό κι αυτό.
Reply
:iconuglysavag:
UglySavag Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Μπορείς να περιγράψεις μια σκηνη, που συναντιούνται μετά από χρονια;
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Όχι, η ιστορία αυτή τελείωσε, δεν πρόκειται να ξανασυνατηθούν!
Reply
:iconuglysavag:
UglySavag Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Καλά εντάξει μην αγριεύεις.
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Δεν αγριύω, απλά είμαι απόλυτος στο ότι δεν υπάχει, δεν θα υπάρξει συνέχεια.
Reply
:iconoliviathehealer:
OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Νόμιζα πως στην επόχη μας δεν γράφονται παραμύθια.
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Έκανες λάθος!
Reply
:iconeyirokafou:
EyiRokafou Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ευχαριστώ.
Reply
:iconeyirokafou:
EyiRokafou Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Παρακαλώ.
Reply
:iconlegolaspanther:
LegolasPanther Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I read this work to the full, and its very well done! You could visually picture all that was happening in each stanza as you read it. There was always something new and interesting to expect when you came to the next stanza each time. There are not very many narratives out there, and this one was well done. The way you narrated it offered visual and emotional impact that was strong and definite. Also, I can tell that this story was thought over carefully on each stanza, which proves its originality.

However, I am focusing very much on technique, because there were times in the poem where it got a bit stilted and choppy. For example, the first beginning stanzas of the poem flowed smoothly, till it reached about near the middle, was where the flow just seemed to get less rhythmic.

In complete summation of the work, its very well done to its full!

~Legolas


Vision 5/5
Originality 5/5
Impact 5/5
Technique 3.5/5
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
You are right that sth is changing on the technique near the middle.
Reply
:iconc-blaze21:
C-blaze21 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
Tragic.
Reply
:iconkaizenkitty:
KaizenKitty Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Student Writer
A fantastic story of love and loss, complete with romantic chivalry and mysterious darkness that must be fought. :D I like it. Sometimes you mix up the grammar to fit the lines -- I think that's a very good thing, shows variety, keeps it fresh. One thing I liked less about it: your vocabulary seems rather small...(maybe it's only in this poem), but here it rather struck me as problematic. Especially when your verses are very short, if you overuse certain words, it tends to show.
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
Reply
:iconrainazekiller:
Rainazekiller Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
Good job😃
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
Reply
:iconvaporsheart:
vaporsheart Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it's like you collaborated with shakespear on this work or something :heart::heart::heart: i love it! :D
Reply
:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
shakespear??????? Really thanks!!!!
Reply
:iconvaporsheart:
vaporsheart Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconvaporsheart::iconyouarewelcomeplz:
Reply
:iconbrodskales:
brodskales Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Down with the union!
lol yeah it's very nice!

~Scruffy
Reply
:icongypsymountainman:
GypsyMountainman Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Professional Writer
Love the story here, Tragic, but so is life, very well done
Reply
:iconmaryjayne530:
maryjayne530 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×

:icondraganthemighty: More from DraganTheMighty


Featured in Collections


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
March 20, 2013
File Size
6.1 KB
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
2,341 (2 today)
Favourites
134 (who?)
Comments
98
×