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WHEN I WAS YOUNG


Once upon a time,

When I was young,
I believed our world is nice.

When I was young...

I thought I was the faulty one,

A parasite, a virus,
so sick and so hideous

I was asking so much,
always more than my lunch

"All these goodies, not enough?
What is more you need to laugh?"


When I was young,
I believed our world is nice

I felt, I was the broken one...

So I was shy, very shy

When I should and when I shouldn't...

I was so silly, stupid!

I thought I'm asking so much!
More than I need for lunch!

And if it happened to need more,
I would never ask it for.


But now I've grown so much,
little shame for my lunch,

Some they say, no shame at all,
that I'm out of control.

But now I've grown so much...

I always ask it for!
There's no shame, No more!
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NemoX7 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014   Writer
Very well written. The subject matter really entices the reader in. Indeed it differs from person to person I belief but those who are introverted can be just be as outgoing as those naturally extrovert. It merely takes time for that person to gain the confidence to walk higher than the clouds. Well done on an evocative thought inducing read. :)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
Really thanks!
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SEwing0109 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you outgrew or overcame your shyness. Good work.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
Thanks.
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SEwing0109 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:thumbsup:
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah I relate to this, it's well written and from the heart I think...
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MissesUnlucky Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this piece! It's relatable, and it pulls the reader in from the start!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
Thanks, happy you like it.
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OlyaSkyCat Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
:love::love:
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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