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WHEN I WAS YOUNG


Once upon a time,

When I was young,
I believed our world is nice.

When I was young...

I thought I was the faulty one,

A parasite, a virus,
so sick and so hideous

I was asking so much,
always more than my lunch

"All these goodies, not enough?
What is more you need to laugh?"


When I was young,
I believed our world is nice

I felt, I was the broken one...

So I was shy, very shy

When I should and when I shouldn't...

I was so silly, stupid!

I thought I'm asking so much!
More than I need for lunch!

And if it happened to need more,
I would never ask it for.


But now I've grown so much,
little shame for my lunch,

Some they say, no shame at all,
that I'm out of control.

But now I've grown so much...

I always ask it for!
There's no shame, No more!
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Batfan1939 Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you outgrew or overcame your shyness. Good work.
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Batfan1939 Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:thumbsup:
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KingfisherSilentArmy Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah I relate to this, it's well written and from the heart I think...
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I really like this piece! It's relatable, and it pulls the reader in from the start!
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Thanks, happy you like it.
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:icondraganthemighty:
Ευχαριστώ.
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:icondraganthemighty:
Ευχαριστώ.
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