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Once upon a time,

When I was young,
I believed our world is nice.

When I was young...

I thought I was the faulty one,

A parasite, a virus,
so sick and so hideous

I was asking so much,
always more than my lunch

"All these goodies, not enough?
What is more you need to laugh?"


When I was young,
I believed our world is nice

I felt, I was the broken one...

So I was shy, very shy

When I should and when I shouldn't...

I was so silly, stupid!

I thought I'm asking so much!
More than I need for lunch!

And if it happened to need more,
I would never ask it for.


But now I've grown so much,
little shame for my lunch,

Some they say, no shame at all,
that I'm out of control.

But now I've grown so much...

I always ask it for!
There's no shame, No more!
Αντίστοιχο Στα Ελληνικά:

Otan Imouna Mikros

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:iconagentwow1:
Agentwow1 Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Well done, I love it!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner May 1, 2015
Thanks!
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NemoX7 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014   Writer
Very well written. The subject matter really entices the reader in. Indeed it differs from person to person I belief but those who are introverted can be just be as outgoing as those naturally extrovert. It merely takes time for that person to gain the confidence to walk higher than the clouds. Well done on an evocative thought inducing read. :)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
Really thanks!
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SEwing0109 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you outgrew or overcame your shyness. Good work.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
Thanks.
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SEwing0109 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:thumbsup:
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah I relate to this, it's well written and from the heart I think...
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MissesUnlucky Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this piece! It's relatable, and it pulls the reader in from the start!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
Thanks, happy you like it.
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OlyaSkyCat Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
:love::love:
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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AlyssaSkyFox Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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kostaschicken Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Μοναδικό και ιδιοτροπο κι όμως σε δυο γλώσσες!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Ευχαριστώ πολύ!
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kostaschicken Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Να 'σαι καλά.
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LenaKenanou Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Τί να πω για αυτό;
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JimmyRoger Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Ο ορισμός του rendering!
Ποιό έγραψες πρώτο;
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:icondraganthemighty:
DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
Το ελληνικό.
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MarilenaAlexia Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Ειναι φοβερο το πως κατάφερς να κρατησεις τον ρυθμοό ακριβώς ίδιο και στο αγγλικό και στο ελληνικό.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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MarilenaAlexia Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Εγώ θα πρεπε να σ' ευχαριστώ.
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CrubeTheSiren Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Σ' αρεσουν οι METALLICA?
Αυτο είναι το δικό σου ΟΝΕ!!!!
Και σε δυο γλώσσες!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Τα παραλες.
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ErikTheWild Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Βασικά, Πολυ καλό!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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MariaKat00 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Καλό.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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MariaKat00 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Παρακαλώ.
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elizawolfgirl Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Υπουλα έντονο!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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elizawolfgirl Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Αληθεια λέω.
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
:love:
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GraceTornoshaya Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
!!!!!!!!!!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Ευχαριστώ
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OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Και τα δυο εξαιρετικά!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Ευχαριστώ.
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OliviaTheHealer Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Είναι, πραγματικά.
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Ευχαριστώ!!!!!!!!!!!!
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UglySavag Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
Και το αγγλικό και το ελληνικό, Ξέρεις τί μου θυμίζει;
ένα τραγούδι του Μηλιώκα, "Για το καλό μου"
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Need a hug?
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
More Than 50 Favs!!!!
Thank You All!!!!!
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Eredev Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
Very interesting and I like the rythm :)
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
Thanks!
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Eredev Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
No problem :)
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Konamiabstract Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Professional Filmographer
When I was young...

I thought I was the faulty one,

NICE ONE BRO
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
Thanks.
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:iconkonamiabstract:
Konamiabstract Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Professional Filmographer
npz
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